Readers Wanted

I have finished a 4th round of Equipment books for To A Bloody Pulp, including a first draft of a Vehicle Book (including zeppelins!).


I would like someone or someones to read over them and tell me if there is something that doesn't make sense or is messed up before I finalize the process.


The Four Booklets (Armor and Melee Weapons,  Guns,  Regular Gear and Vehicles) can be found at this page in the To A Bloody Pulp Wiki: (there are tons of pictures)


GO HERE FOR GEAR